SO MUCH dialogue content made it really painful to read .It was 75% dialogue and 25% gameplay,It would have been more interesting if the dialouge was spoken.After the last fight frankly i didnt care about the dialogues anymore I may have clicked 100 times after that.However the part which should be worked upon is the art.It needs to be worked upon very thoroughly,I saw quite a lot of instability in your characters The dr.It should actually not happen and though i understad you have ben using the manga style of art but even manga demans good art.Another thing is that practise a lot of ogf human anatomy.Sorry to say but You are frankly not good at it.The current standard demands higher level of art knowledge .
I am very very sorry if you thought I was rude.it was my attempt to give a Constructive feed back as a well wisher,I didnt mean to hurt you buddy
Take care